Thursday, 14 October 2010


I am happy to announce you all that I joined two more poetry blogs that prompts poets to write more.The first  one is for Three Word Wednesday(3WW) : Hiss, Absolve, Ridicule.I finally tried to write a poem with those three given words.The last poem is written for One single Impression's prompt "LONELY".
Again, A Haiku Word(5-7-5), you can see that I got in love with the Haiku. It says that he never leaves me ;)



Down hissed the rainfall
Washing dirt's that ridiculed
The greens were absolved




Make thy door's open
For thou' who has lonely hearts
So I may come in





Ha! A final touch ...
A Haiku itself is a Beauty, a picture added to it is A final touch :)

15 comments:

Abigail Parker said...

A lovely pair of haiku! Very vivid images.

Friko said...

I am another one who loves poems.
We have therefore much in common.

Thank you for visiting my blog.

Tweety said...

lovely haiku's...i am always so jealous of people who can write haiku's such beautifully and with such ease...simply great :) thought both are great i would say i am a little partial towards the second one...

Sat_hi_sh said...

Hey what is a haiku ?????

btw the poem was really good :)

umapoems said...

@all Thanks for your comments!
@sathish ...to know abt haiku do read my 'A little bit of complaining' poem

ThomG said...

like them both, equally.

Emmanuel Ibok said...

Both of them are wonderful and you did a great job following the prompt with precision...Nice one!

TGIF, have a great weekend,
Cheers!

Ramesh Sood said...

Very well done.. loved them both.. like twins.. can't be partial..

Umm Mymoonah said...

Both the pictures looks amazing.

Jingle said...

love your taste of images and words...
breath taking Haikus!

Anonymous said...

both are fabulous!

trisha
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clare said...

both have a nice, soothing quality

Sumit Sarkar said...

Loved both the haikus...
The first one though is superb... :)

fiveloaf said...

lovely..

Jingle said...

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-award-nomination-announcement/

how are you?
please vote when you have a moment,

you are nominated, automatically, u win 1 vote,
when you vote for other poets, u win another vote for yourself,

thanks for the attention.

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