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Make thy door's openFor thou' who has lonely hearts
Ha! A final touch ...
Rainfall & Heart Haiku's
I am happy to announce you all that I joined two more poetry blogs that prompts poets to write more.The first one is for Three Word Wednesday(3WW) : Hiss, Absolve, Ridicule.I finally tried to write a poem with those three given words.The last poem is written for One single Impression's prompt "LONELY".
Again, A Haiku Word(5-7-5), you can see that I got in love with the Haiku. It says that he never leaves me ;)
Down hissed the rainfall
Washing dirt's that ridiculed
The greens were absolved
Make thy door's open
So I may come in
Ha! A final touch ...
A Haiku itself is a Beauty, a picture added to it is A final touch :)
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15 Responses to “Rainfall & Heart Haiku's”
Thursday, October 14, 2010
A lovely pair of haiku! Very vivid images.
Thursday, October 14, 2010
I am another one who loves poems.
We have therefore much in common.
Thank you for visiting my blog.
Thursday, October 14, 2010
lovely haiku's...i am always so jealous of people who can write haiku's such beautifully and with such ease...simply great :) thought both are great i would say i am a little partial towards the second one...
Thursday, October 14, 2010
Hey what is a haiku ?????
btw the poem was really good :)
Thursday, October 14, 2010
@all Thanks for your comments!
@sathish ...to know abt haiku do read my 'A little bit of complaining' poem
Thursday, October 14, 2010
like them both, equally.
Friday, October 15, 2010
Both of them are wonderful and you did a great job following the prompt with precision...Nice one!
TGIF, have a great weekend,
Cheers!
Friday, October 15, 2010
Very well done.. loved them both.. like twins.. can't be partial..
Friday, October 15, 2010
Both the pictures looks amazing.
Friday, October 15, 2010
love your taste of images and words...
breath taking Haikus!
Saturday, October 16, 2010
both are fabulous!
trisha
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Monday, October 18, 2010
both have a nice, soothing quality
Tuesday, October 19, 2010
Loved both the haikus...
The first one though is superb... :)
Tuesday, October 26, 2010
lovely..
Wednesday, October 27, 2010
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-award-nomination-announcement/
how are you?
please vote when you have a moment,
you are nominated, automatically, u win 1 vote,
when you vote for other poets, u win another vote for yourself,
thanks for the attention.
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