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Monday, 18 October 2010

Serenity !

Three Haiku's (5-7-5) for you wherein the serenity plays different roles of helping one's mind to calmness  in the first poem and alluring one's mind to calmness in the second poem  .In the last poem the serenity is Balanced.


Leads thy mind to thwart
Obsession needs a rescue
Serenity Aids!




So deep is your love
When I look into your eyes
Confessed serene look








The Seven Sins of
Wrath ,Greed,Sloth,Pride,Lust,Spite,Gorge
Destroys Serenity

Balance them with love
Your heart becomes a temple
Where serene lasts ever
                                                                                        

Written in response to
Haiku Heights!
The Seven Sins Prompt by Jingle Poetry

26 comments:

  1. What a wonderful Haiku!Loved them both.

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  2. awesome ones Uma :)
    loved the way you worked them together :D

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  3. very creative - wise advice

    loveNlight
    Gabi

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  4. @all Thanks for your comments!

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  5. I liked those.. and how you made the sinful one ... just the opposite.. nice :)

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  6. Nice little pieces, quite lovely haikus, with some interesting pictures as well. Well done!

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  7. Good piece, sweet starters.
    I liked these.

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  8. Serenity definitely plays an important role in one's personal happiness...I like how you weaved that concept in these pieces...nicely done. (^_^)

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  9. Loved all of them...so beautiful... :)

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  10. @all Thanks !I am and will try to impress you all with different forms of poem so that you enjoy being with me friends :)

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  11. Nice to meet you, Uma!
    It can be fun to take a word
    and play with it -- until you own it.
    Serenity has now been added to your repertoire.
    Peace, Uncle Tree

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  12. Loved your haikus

    regards

    Luke @ WordSalad

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  13. @me2watson - very true.We poeters love words that crafts our poem into beautiful shape.The skeleton of the poem is the words,without it poems are never a poem.

    @luke-Thanks!

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  14. Ah my friend love all three. You really get to the meaning.


    Melanie

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  15. wonderful haikus.. Loved them :)
    Regards~ Sayan

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  16. Succinct and soooo well expressed, I loved it so...thanks xx

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  17. You are an inspiration. Poetry heals. Thanks for sharing.

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  18. great little thoughts on a deep emotion, nicely written.

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  19. Superbly conveyed the serenity in different pieces!Pondicherrians are filled with serenity!Are the paintings and pictures yours...?

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  20. Well said and I love your words...Only love can balance them to give this world a serene atmosphere...:)

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  21. yes.. I remember reading this, Uma.. lovely words..

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