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An opened window - A prisoner
Every wednesday, poeters are given picture prompt by Magpie Tales.We have to write a poem or short vignette using the picture featured in their post as our inspiration.The below picture prompted me to write Two Haiku's (5-7-5) of an opened window.
Haiku 1: Thoughts of a person caught in prison mentally
Through darkness I saw
A lost opportunity
An escape shines bright
Haiku 2: Thoughts of a person caught in prison physically
Darkness everywhere
My only way to escape
An opened window
My only way to escape
An opened window
Poem above written for Magpie Tales picture prompt.
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24 Responses to “An opened window - A prisoner”
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
"...a lost opportunity..." What a great line.
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
It is always good IF there is an open window through which one can escape...either in actuality or by gazing at what is outside. Nice Haiku.
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
interesting pair of approaches
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
i really like the way you used escape like a light at the end of the tunnel great haikus :)
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
Amazing how similar the two prisoners can be. Great haikus!
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
Amazing the difference between a mentally ill person and a regular prisoner. Beautifully described.
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
Many of us have related to this Magpie in the same way. Very nice haiku's & I love the piano music in the background. Lovely!
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
powerful piece.
hope you well.
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
Interesting take on the prompt!
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
two separate views on light on escape...thank you..bkm
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
I really liked your Haiku. I am not so good at it. Never attempted it.
The concept of darkness and light, captivity( of thoughts, etc) and freedom is nice.
Thursday, October 14, 2010
Two wonderful haiku's , well done! :o)
Thursday, October 14, 2010
both haiku are powerful - strong message
thanks for stopping by my place
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Thursday, October 14, 2010
These are both so truthfully and magically worded!
Thursday, October 14, 2010
so powerful...both of them hell
Thursday, October 14, 2010
Wonderful Haikus but I have to admit that number one is my favorite!
Thursday, October 14, 2010
two nice haikus! well done
Friday, October 15, 2010
Very beautifully written and a good depiction of prisoner of mind and a body in the prison..
Saturday, October 16, 2010
both are poignant...i think that as many are mentally if not more these days...
Saturday, October 16, 2010
@all Thanks
@Diane&Brian...I did'nt mean its a mentally ill person but a person stuck between problems in between searching for a solution mentally .
I learn to Look how poems pictures itself differently in each poets mind :)
Saturday, October 16, 2010
great magpie--I can see how this view when imprisoned physically or mentally would be challenging and elicit pain and yearning--c
Monday, October 18, 2010
Darkness can be imprisoning... Nicely done.
Tuesday, October 19, 2010
I enjoyed the freshness of this response.
Tuesday, October 19, 2010
Interesting -- lost opportunities, it reminds me of how we carelessly let time slip through our hands, unnoticed like the back door to the house left open.
Beautiful haiku and lovely music.
joanny
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