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These three are perfection. You state so much, so eloquently, in so few words and lines. I admire your ease with haiku, a form I find very challenging. Great response to the prompt!
those are well penned micro poetry ... enjoyed reading.
Love the haiku!I have my own haiku blog: Haiku Koo-Koo
Lovely haikus...And the cinquain is too good...Thank you for sharing :)
Delightful and poignant Haikus.
All three poems are wonderful..a minimum of words used to describe maximum fears. Brilliantly done!
@All Thanks for dropping by.You all boost me more to write more :)
I hear you! Yes, I do!
If one day you feel like crying,Call me. I don’t promise that I will make you laugh, But I can cry with you. If one day you want to run away,Don’t be afraid to call me. I don’t promise to ask you to stop, But I can run with you.
Nice, Uma :)
The last was my favorite. I've oft asked the same of sleep. Wonderful!
u r super creative.love the shape.
Perfect poetry forms for the prompt...well spoken and i understand completely....wonderful writing Uma! :-)
@all Thanks for the true words :)
beautiful fear Haikus.Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful... I enjoyed it so much.. thanks for sharing..ॐ नमः शिवाय Om Namah Shivaya Twitter: @VerseEveryDay Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
I do like haikus - they are really hard to write well! These work for me!http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/halloween-fright/
A triad of slick writes, thanks for the enjoyable reads.
Sleep, yes, the only escape! Great job~
Great examples with words, of your fear, about fear itself.Excellent prompt response.Eileen
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Very well done Uma..That image couldn't have been better..I feel so nervous when scared that I lose my sleep too..!!Happy Halloween.. xox
Fears can really cripple our thinking... no?Very nicely penned, Uma... Kudos!In such few words, you have conveyed the most dreaded feeling! Too good!
@all Thanks for visiting!@ray-lovely message in a poem.Cheers!
Wonderful idea to take a theme and write about it in different poetry forms. I have so much to learn about poetry forms and like seeing how well you do them. Thanks! hugs, pat
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