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CINQUAIN (Know it)
Phobia.
Worst fear
Fear of negligence
Destroys content in life
Panic !
HAIKU -1 (Know it)Neglected feelings!
To gain my confidence back
I go back to work
HAIKU - 2
Fear strikes back at me
I am left confused throughout
Oh ,Sleep embrace me !
26 comments:
These three are perfection. You state so much, so eloquently, in so few words and lines. I admire your ease with haiku, a form I find very challenging. Great response to the prompt!
those are well penned micro poetry ... enjoyed reading.
Love the haiku!
I have my own haiku blog: Haiku Koo-Koo
Lovely haikus...
And the cinquain is too good...
Thank you for sharing :)
Delightful and poignant Haikus.
All three poems are wonderful..a minimum of words used to describe maximum fears. Brilliantly done!
@All Thanks for dropping by.You all boost me more to write more :)
I hear you! Yes, I do!
If one day you feel like crying,
Call me.
I don’t promise that I will make you laugh,
But I can cry with you.
If one day you want to run away,
Don’t be afraid to call me.
I don’t promise to ask you to stop,
But I can run with you.
Nice, Uma :)
The last was my favorite. I've oft asked the same of sleep. Wonderful!
u r super creative.
love the shape.
Perfect poetry forms for the prompt...well spoken and i understand completely....wonderful writing Uma! :-)
@all Thanks for the true words :)
nice haikus!
beautiful fear Haikus.
Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful... I enjoyed it so much.. thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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I do like haikus - they are really hard to write well! These work for me!
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/01/halloween-fright/
A triad of slick writes, thanks for the enjoyable reads.
Sleep, yes, the only escape! Great job~
Great examples with words, of your fear, about fear itself.
Excellent prompt response.
Eileen
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Thanks a lot for the support.
Happy November!
Your presence adds light to our space, keep shining!
xxx
Very well done Uma..
That image couldn't have been better..
I feel so nervous when scared that I lose my sleep too..!!
Happy Halloween.. xox
Fears can really cripple our thinking... no?
Very nicely penned, Uma... Kudos!
In such few words, you have conveyed the most dreaded feeling! Too good!
@all Thanks for visiting!
@ray-lovely message in a poem.Cheers!
Wonderful idea to take a theme and write about it in different poetry forms. I have so much to learn about poetry forms and like seeing how well you do them. Thanks! hugs, pat
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