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A small dedication to my Mother and Father.I chose to write this poem in Double Acrostic so that my little poem will have both at the beginning and ending the same letter and meaning giving the sense that we children of our parents comes in between the two pillars(parents) of their life.And we are protected within them safe and sound guarding us from all hurts. I am thankful to them for what I am today.
MOTHER
Mother a living embleM
Organises her kids to dO
Their works with minimum efforT
Having them learn what is wortH
Enlightening them with care and hopE
Rising the young hearts with unconditional love and cheeR
FATHER
Filling his little one's mind full oF
Adventure, he is the perfect papA
Teaching them what is besT
Hunting with them in areas higH
Engaging them in the real life gamE
Recognizing their talent to make a successful carreeR
And a dedication to my beloved daughter on her Birthday 11/10 today 'Monday'
DAUGHTER
My Daughter's birthday
its A celebration
for Us all
to Give and receive
happy Hugs of love
and Toys she loves
to Enjoy playing
a Rejoiceful day
Why leave my son,here for you my little one (05/11)
SON
My Son smiling
thinking Of his coming
birthday Nearing very soon
Did you see the way I wrote the above two poems for my children.Guessed right.Yes,In between the Two pillars called Mother and Father :)..another form of Acrostic , middle or complex form of Acrostic
23 comments:
Exquisite Acrostics, beautifully written. Very original and packed with Love!
@Saras..Thanks a lot! :)
I admire your skill in acrostics. They are beautiful and loving, and I would think they were both difficult and enjoyable to write!
This is very challenging, you made it cool!
beautiful pieces.
Beautiful. Keep writing. We need more good poets out here.
Best,
Shail
@ Thanks for your valuable comments.I love to play with poems.They are my passion !
Cleverly done.
What a wonderful tribute to your family...enjoyed reading this.
umapoems,
A very different style. I enjoyed reading this poem very much indeed.
Best wishes,
Eileen
I like how you "play with poems"...I am just learning and I learn a lot from all you pros!
Great tribute to your family!
nice effort....
wonderful words.
Hey Uma! how do write this?! juggling with letters and words.
A nice expression for your family. Lovely blog too... will be coming back. am following u dear!
RESTLESS
@ all Thanks for the comments1
@ restless mind...As I have said before I have a passion for poems ,and maybe that makes me to write better :)..thanks for joining me in my journey..someday I will publish them all when I reach 100.
beautiful...just beautiful poem......long time i read any poems...and will continue to read them here...
brilliant, and tough foursome.
trisha
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Loved your attitude!
Wonderful job, I'll have to try using acrostics myself. Lovely music.
Lovely game of words ... and the music "River flows in you" my favorite!
working within those parameters is a monumental accomplishment and a testament to what you are saying. Great job!
Very beautiful and creative!! Glad I stopped by to read this.. wonderfully woven words..:D
Happy Potluck xox
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Definitely enjoyed the multiple layers of your pieces, Umamaheswari. Crazily accomplished.
Splendidly creative, thanks for the great read1
@all-Thanks for commenting..I too love this poem very much
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