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Its An Hourglass Life
HoURglASs LiFE :
I am caught up in the top part
Feeling strong but afraid I will fall back apart
I am caught at the bottom part
Feeling strong to make again to the top to restart
Grains of sand I am thought of
But not,I am grain of tiny men thereof
Waiting for my turn to go up and down
Swirling inside the hourglass town
You and me,we push in to go first into the hourglass hone
As we are aware that Time and Tide waits for None
Poem written for Magpie Tales
I am caught up in the top part
Feeling strong but afraid I will fall back apart
I am caught at the bottom part
Feeling strong to make again to the top to restart
Grains of sand I am thought of
But not,I am grain of tiny men thereof
Waiting for my turn to go up and down
Swirling inside the hourglass town
You and me,we push in to go first into the hourglass hone
As we are aware that Time and Tide waits for None
Poem written for Magpie Tales
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13 Responses to “Its An Hourglass Life”
Monday, September 20, 2010
well done!
Monday, September 20, 2010
I love the line "swirling around this hourglass town"....that is what life is exactly like at times...you put it in perspective here...bkm
Monday, September 20, 2010
Time and tide waits for none. This is so true! Nice Magpie.
Monday, September 20, 2010
Intriguing poem! I enjoyed it!
Monday, September 20, 2010
excellent piece.. very well penned!
Tuesday, September 21, 2010
@all Thanks.Your comments are valuable and it is a motivator for writing more :)
Wednesday, September 22, 2010
very well done! Lovely to read out loud.
Friday, October 08, 2010
so true and beautiful!
Sunday, November 13, 2011
Brilliant!! "Swirling inside the hourglass town" is beautifully said!! A very focused and refined write!!
Sunday, November 13, 2011
Excellent truth put in very few words :) Liked it :)
Monday, November 14, 2011
The 'swirling around in hourglass town' bit caught me as well! Very nice poem!
Monday, November 14, 2011
Lovely poem this.. well done..
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Saturday, November 19, 2011
love it.
superb imagery.
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